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Jeannie Ewing's avatar

Jane, thank you so much for introducing me to Nicole's essay collection, and for featuring her thoughtful commentary about the ethics of including others in our memoir.

Nicole, this was so helpful to me. I have a polished draft of my own memoir manuscript (about my motherhood being shaped by my religious upbringing and then shattered by the birth of my daughter who was born with a rare genetic condition), so I have grappled with this issue many times. I have heard several NF writers speak of this in different ways, and the one piece of advice that struck me the most was this: Have a conversation with the people who show up in your book before it's published.

I know this can be tricky for many reasons, and for some it simply cannot be an option (in the case of abuse, for example). I think I can navigate it, though, especially with the more tenuous relationships, like between me and my mom. What I chose to do was write the book uncensored and continue to revise without censorship, and once my book is (hopefully) picked up by a publisher, then I will have that conversation with my mom to allow her to see what is being made public about our relationship. That doesn't mean I will change the truth, because as you said, I cannot speculate about what she felt or her motivations. I can imagine. I can write about the impact of her behavior on me. And I have.

It's complicated, but you did a beautiful job of explaining how this can be done. And you offered me a boost of hope. Thank you!

MOTHER

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Mary P.'s avatar

Nicole, thank you for sharing this wonderfully written essay. Memoirs have long been one of my favorite reads, and I will be adding yours to my list of books to read. When I delve into a memoir I feel like I am transported into the author’s life and walking beside them through the stories written. MOTHER

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