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What a beautiful tribute to the divine ordinariness of life. It feels reassuring, like a warm blanket on a chilly autumn morning (which it is here in the southern hemisphere). Thanks for sharing

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Oh, I love that: the divine ordinariness of life. Yes! And perfect for an autumn morning! I hope you have an easy winter! Where are you located?

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I'm in Auckland, New Zealand. New to Substack and just discovering so much nourishing writing on here!

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Oh, lovely! And, yes, there is quite a bit of nourishing writing here! We're lucky.

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Mar 24, 2023Liked by Jane Ratcliffe

There's something about this poem that reminds me of Mrs. Dalloway: the cadence, but also the content--a woman, walking in a city street when she catches a glimpse of her reflection.

I hope you savor your very well-deserved break!

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Oh, yes! I can see that, very much. I often think of this poem when I catch mine--and now I'll also think of Mrs. Dalloway!

And thank you! I plan on it!

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Mar 24, 2023Liked by Jane Ratcliffe

This is beautiful Jane! Reading this in the middle of a work day, and it did re-arrange the cells in my body as well. Hugs to you for sharing!

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Yay! I’m so glad! Hugs back!

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This is one of my very favorite poems. Reading it again this morning was like seeing an old friend. And also I cried. Thank you for sharing it!

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Aw, I love that. It is like an old friend. And, yes, tears every time!

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Mar 23, 2023Liked by Jane Ratcliffe

Thank you so much for sharing this, Jane. I've never read it before. It's stunning.

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I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It truly changed me!

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Can you explain “how” it “changed” you???

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Yes. I share your love of this sentiment. Not in the cell-rearranging way it struck you perhaps, but a deep appreciation for what she says.( and I will seek out the rest of her poems) I especially remember when, 17 years ago, I was diagnosed with breast cancer, and thinking "what do you do now? You make pancakes."

That brilliant realization when she sees herself reflected back in the store front window. Reminds me of a sentiment I often share in my role as a curator of chamber music concerts- to remind our audience members how they need art and beauty in their lives, and to seek it out, even the most mundane, where we can. They will find that it's abundant, even in times of crisis.

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Firstly, I'm so sorry you had breast cancer. Secondly, yes, that is sort of the only response: you make pancakes. Of course, many layers can accompany that. But at the essence, that's it.

And such beautiful advice you share with audience members. When you're able to do it, it changes everything.

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