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B.A. Lampman's avatar

Never have I wanted something so much than to have that couple leave Ortiz with you 😭. That made me cry.

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Jillian Hess's avatar

I saw that this was an 18 minute read & thought, I’ll just glance at it and return later. Nope. I read it all in one big gulp. Just brilliant on so many levels. I love the way you switch tenses. I love how you knit your story together with Ortiz. I love the balance of anguish and pleasure. Loneliness & companionship. Just loved this so much!

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